You just got it right.
You just got the message well shown. It doesn't matter the doodads, you are able to send the message and that's the most important thing.
I love when a character is constantly suffering through the darkness of his/hers story just to be blind by the SUNSHINE.
...You mean somebody understands "sunshine"?
"Great piece of work I think it is"
I just will tell ya that the photograph was good. And I know that all the animation needed a lot of work. Keep going with this, you only could work a little more on the story, you could make another one as "clasical" as these.
One thing more, you could have used a camera, filmed it and used Affter Effects to make the same effect. However, I consider this a great and original piece of flash, photoshop and photographing wokr.
Keep going dude.
You is the second-person personal pronoun, both singular and plural, and both nominative and oblique case, in Modern English.
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"Sunshine" 
Project Lumière 
