Nice!
This was entertaining, it's nice when you take a simple action and drag it out to something that knows its time to end.
I would only suggest you to sinc the frog animation with the beats of the music, it may be only one frame out of sync but it grows with time. It may be a little detail, but is one that will give 'strenght' to your animation.
Have a nice croak!
Muy bien
(Sé que en chile hablan español, pero que hay varios modismos en la escritura así que si algo no queda claro, dime y te lo intentaré reexplicar)
La animación estuvo muy fluida, con un buen timing y lineas de acción dignas de esas animaciones de monos de palo que se volvieron tan famosas de Xiao Xiao, a excepción de los planos en que gira la cámara en 3d claro.
Fuera de eso, empezó bien tu animación con lo de la pelota, entonces queda la duda de hasta donde llegará el personaje por la bola, especialmente cuando se mete en la nave espacial y se teletransporta. El problema es precisamente la conclusión, es demasiado rápida en comparación al resto, lo cual le hace mal a todo lo que habías logrado con tanto trabajo en el desarrollo.
La próxima vez, dale más tiempo a la conclusión, porque recuerda que incluso un buen final es capaz de salvar un mal desarrollo (si es que el espectador sigue viendo), pero un mal final puede echar a perder un buen desarrollo.
Entiendo lo que quieres decir y gracias por hacerlo lo tendre en cuenta.
Nice
It gets intesting with time, so it works. The sound desing was overall good, Your characters got personality and and mostrly your graphics are pretty good, yet you need to improve your animation, it looks too mechanic, try to apply action lines to your character poses and some acceleration to make them more natural.
By the way - at the end of each part, now that you have the NG and DA links, you could make a button to go automatically to the next episode. You may even want to make a menú with all aviable episodes, it will not only make it easier to find the episodes with a custom menú made by you, itcould also encourage your viewers to watch more.
Action lines as in a line on a new layer as guides or like, an actual motion guide? either way, it's a great suggestion. I'm gonna try my best not to split following episodes up, but links to other episodes sound like a good idea, too. Thanks for the review!
¡Incredible!
The texture and the movement realism you achieved there are awesome, and neither you missed the sound or the music which were, acording to the genre, pretty good too; aah, and the "storytelling" was good too, even if a couple of times I didn't know who the intruder was because of the speed and their colors, and the "side by side" shots which normally aren't very amazing had their attractive, but it is obvios that the most impressing of it were the effects.
Congratulations.
Sorry about this poor review, I just can't think about something important to improve to make an actual constructive review ...
Jeje Fine
About your walk/run cycles, you sure noticed that the legs turn around like their hips could actually twist, that means you missed a frame or two; if you want the length to reamain the same, you may erase another not so important frames and add the ones you need, but withouth changing the legs aceleration of course. Next time you make a walk or run loop, remember that.
Keep it up
Congratulations!
They sure already told you about everything else, I just wanted to tell ya the voice acting was very good, I haven't heard one as good in a while. Congrats.
Too close
I didn't quite get what was going on, and not only because of one of the dialogues that was pretty fast, but because you use too many close ups, I know action movies use a lot of first shots and close ups, yet not every one of them are like that. In your case, there's no reference where are the characters, nor who they are or why they do what they do. In a few words, you failed giving all the necessary information to understand what was on, after achieving that, you may concentrate on the drama, the colors or the animation, you say.
Keep it up
Well, it's got it's own style, hope your characters develop more on next episode.
Digital-guy may be talking about your first scene where George is got the same color of the floor, the same with the grass and the celery. You should change the grass & floors's tone or their brightness a bit, that should do it.
Practice and improvement, that's what it need.
Well, everything needs improvement, your walk cycles, your backgrounds, your characters, the audio... nothing practice and study other animations as well can't solve. Just decide what you're more interested now, for example, perspective, or maybe ways to tell story not always "with the camera on the front" like it was a theater, by the way, don't get too upset about it, I'm almost sure that most animators begin making everything very flat, by now I recommend you try to repeat the scene of any movie or animation you like, it may give you some ideas beyond practice, really. You could even adapt some sitcom episode to your series, who knows?
Thank you for your comments. I'm interested in how to improve and comments like these help out a lot. Thanks for watching.
Hilarious
I loved the animation from the begining, well syncronized with the music, it was neat and clean, and the style was acordding to the sense, still you may want to practice drawing to improve .
And about improving and techniques, In my opinion it doesn't really matter if you use tween, shape, stop or go motion, or frame by frame animation. Those are just tools you decide how to use them to your like.
By the way, I'm wondering about how did you do the aerial shot that became the planet, was it a ripped video or did you animate a set of different pictures?
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