Atzu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Robotech Sentinels Part 2]

WOW

Wow it's what I say! This episode was not too much interesting but I can quite see where ye are going.
There's couple of thins you should work on:
1-Improve your chara talking, animate their mouths according to their dialoges, avoiding those loops.
2-Check out for your image's borders, there's still in some of them a little border that doesn't look very well, try to erase it by smoothing the edges. If you optimize the shape's and then work on them, they will look better... Most of your pictures are ok with that, but you still should check em all.
This is just a suggestion but it can be yet very useful.
3-Create a menu on the top to choose the scene, make it appear each time "_mousey < 25" (or something like that, if you don't know how to script it, ask in the forums, I´m sure there will be plenty of people who could be willing to help ya with that.
Well that's all, keep going with your anime work.
And then I repeat WOW

[Broken dreams 0001]

Liked it a lot.

I liked your movie a lot. I just got a couple of suggestions. First, for next time, watch for the resolution, watch your movie here at newgrounds to see what I mean. Second, there's a cheaper way to make the alpha effect you wanted to do, and it can be cleaner; well, in this movie, yor background was all grey, so you could have just "tinted" your clips, and I tell ya, that uses less memory and looks cleaner. For example, there's a shadow there in which you used the alpha, and when you did it, well... check it yourself to see what I mean. =)
Whatever, good movie and good synchronization with the music. C ya

["Sunshine"]

You just got it right.

You just got the message well shown. It doesn't matter the doodads, you are able to send the message and that's the most important thing.
I love when a character is constantly suffering through the darkness of his/hers story just to be blind by the SUNSHINE.

Luke-Millett responds:

...You mean somebody understands "sunshine"?

[Project Lumière]

"Great piece of work I think it is"

I just will tell ya that the photograph was good. And I know that all the animation needed a lot of work. Keep going with this, you only could work a little more on the story, you could make another one as "clasical" as these.
One thing more, you could have used a camera, filmed it and used Affter Effects to make the same effect. However, I consider this a great and original piece of flash, photoshop and photographing wokr.
Keep going dude.